Comments on: leverage http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/08/leverage/ Poetry, fiction, short stories, more ... Sat, 31 Jul 2010 15:57:44 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Matt http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/08/leverage/comment-page-1/#comment-6417 Matt Wed, 10 Feb 2010 21:08:12 +0000 http://www.shadowofiris.com/?p=1668#comment-6417 Thank you all for the suggestive and wonderful comments! Thank you all for the suggestive and wonderful comments!

]]> By: rinzu susan rajan http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/08/leverage/comment-page-1/#comment-6372 rinzu susan rajan Mon, 08 Feb 2010 09:17:44 +0000 http://www.shadowofiris.com/?p=1668#comment-6372 the last few lines gave a stronger foundation to the entire poem... i mean i have imagined this so many times in mind...it happens and it goes and again when you go that same street down the road you get that effect... good job...!!! the last few lines gave a stronger foundation to the entire poem…

i mean i have imagined this so many times in mind…it happens and it goes and again when you go that same street down the road you get that effect…

good job…!!!

]]> By: jon http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/08/leverage/comment-page-1/#comment-6369 jon Mon, 08 Feb 2010 08:06:26 +0000 http://www.shadowofiris.com/?p=1668#comment-6369 though perhaps she will... and then who will be there to watch but the fallen tree... though perhaps she will… and then who will be there to watch but the fallen tree…

]]> By: Ginger Ingenue http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/08/leverage/comment-page-1/#comment-6368 Ginger Ingenue Mon, 08 Feb 2010 07:32:04 +0000 http://www.shadowofiris.com/?p=1668#comment-6368 Oh, I like this! .. Reading down your page -- some of the best poetry I've read in a long time. Oh, I like this!

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Reading down your page — some of the best poetry I’ve read in a long time.

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