A swing
hangs from a firm branch
over soft calm water
where the only disturbance
is the occasional small fish
that jumps up and out
making a small splattering noise
as it falls back in;
the swing is made of old thin twine
and a worn piece of wood
broken not sawed
and upon it sits
my sweet red haired girl,
she wears the same purple gown
she wore on that first night
I was with her –
how I remember its warm velvet touch
beneath my fingers tips
as I traced her contours
before she reached out
and took my hand in hers
leading me to a secret place
I had never dreamed of –
but now fog covers everything
and though I reach out to you
across the water
there’s an expanse there
that I’ll never get beyond
because you’ve become lost
in thought
distant
and faceless.
– matt at shadow of iris
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[This poem was inspired by the work of Esao Andrews.]



Excellent… maybe not lost…
I love the vivid imagery that you have employed here. It all flows so well. My attention was kept the whole time, and coming from someone with a short attention span…that is a high compliment.
… yes, Kitty, that’s it exactly — I weave a little darkness so that people can see the light. It’s a matter of contrast. You’re exactly right. Thank you.
Thank you, David!