Comments on: to come after http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/21/to-come-after/ Poetry, fiction, short stories, more ... Wed, 08 Sep 2010 17:16:22 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Matt http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/21/to-come-after/comment-page-1/#comment-6809 Matt Tue, 23 Feb 2010 20:18:51 +0000 http://www.shadowofiris.com/?p=1778#comment-6809 Thank you both! Thank you both!

]]> By: KeyChild http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/21/to-come-after/comment-page-1/#comment-6790 KeyChild Tue, 23 Feb 2010 01:26:22 +0000 http://www.shadowofiris.com/?p=1778#comment-6790 This is wonderful. Simple but amazing. It speaks to the musician in me and the poet too. I think it's very successful. My favourite of your poems so far - though, I've not yet read many. This is wonderful. Simple but amazing. It speaks to the musician in me and the poet too. I think it’s very successful. My favourite of your poems so far – though, I’ve not yet read many.

]]> By: Ginger Ingenue http://www.shadowofiris.com/2010/02/21/to-come-after/comment-page-1/#comment-6754 Ginger Ingenue Sun, 21 Feb 2010 09:50:55 +0000 http://www.shadowofiris.com/?p=1778#comment-6754 Oh, I like it! Clever, and kind of funny. "I told him I would try but I would fail" Good stuff. Oh, I like it!

Clever, and kind of funny.

“I told him I would try
but I would fail”

Good stuff.

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