You don’t see me whole
lust
and materiality
revealing only aspects,
abjurations.
A bolt of lightening
flashing in the night
singeing me
and waking me up
from a deep sleep.
– matt at shadow of iris
deep sleep
You don’t see me whole
lust
and materiality
revealing only aspects,
abjurations.
A bolt of lightening
flashing in the night
singeing me
and waking me up
from a deep sleep.
– matt at shadow of iris
deep sleep

wow, its amazing that you conveyed a whole set of feelings in this one.
comparison of very contrasting emotions with the usage of strong imagery.
Nivedita and Rinzu … both of you write poetry that is inspirational to me, thank you so much for your comments!