lightning, a poem

Lightning in a cloud gleams
and hovers
in a suspension of time
between one blink of the eye
and the next
illuminating the dark flood
of the encroaching night.

– percy at shadow of iris
lightning
[Creatively adapted from Percy Bysshe Shelley's Alastor]

Comments

  1. Hopped over here from Tikulis blog. Really enjoyed reading you poems. Beautifully written !

  2. This Shelley idea is pretty neat…are you going to do Ode To The West Wind? Been a fave since high school, when i read and analyzed it for the lit class while ripped on LSD. What a writer! Him and Moorcock are the only things I was ever able to read and enjoy much of during that ah phase of things. Your adaptation here made me think of this Hawkwind track: partly for the lightning and partly for the awesome force of causation hidden in the rest. We in the light of our minds do just that; we briefly, sharply illumine and define the roiling black.

    I think it’s probably what we’re here for, among other things.

    Thanks for the poem –
    PG

  3. @Ruchira:
    Thank you so much for stopping by!

    @Old 333:

    Neat video, thanks. I am a fan of Moorcock as well, especially the Elric books. Neat thoughts, Peter … :)

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