Waves roll
ever forward
towards the shore;
constant change
changeless form;
a stillness
in the movement.
– matt at shadow of iris
waves roll
Waves roll
ever forward
towards the shore;
constant change
changeless form;
a stillness
in the movement.
– matt at shadow of iris
waves roll

Some wonderful possibilities here Matt. It would be great with some descriptive words .
Thank you, Carol!
By the way, I still have some poems coming through where I used the first line as the title. But I am taking seriously what you said and am thinking about this. I’m trying to think of ways in which I can use the title to enhance the poem without projecting too much into it. I take your comments seriously.